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Chapter 8 Page 7

April 13, 2009

I hope this page doesn't NEED any text because it's 3 am again, and I'm way too tired to slap some narrative on there if it doesn't need it. What happened previously will be discussed later, so gripe all you want, but that's not supposed to be there. Yes, the blood effects could be better, but really, there comes a time when an artist just has to say "attaining perfection in an insignificant detail is not my purpose in life, and sleep is more important."

EDIT: Now that I'm rested, more news! On the page: Remember that in the 5 pages previous to this, time passed. Obviously, it hasn't been going well for Ravar. Some things have been happening. His Njinn is changing shape, as you can see. Previously, the blade was straight. Since it was a couple weeks back, I'll refresh your memory: blood makes the steel change.

You'll notice Mersnai looks like he's having fun. Not much beat up either. That's Ravar's blood on his nose and paws. I really enjoyed making this page. Ravar dishes it out a lot. About time he's takes a bit of his own medicine.

I just realized I forgot 2 things on this page. There's supposed to be "pant" sound effects in panel 2. And I didn't draw the fire in any of the brackets. Grraaahhh. I hate it when I do that, because I'm always too lazy to go back and fix it. *facepalm*

Lastly, don't forget about this month's offer for tons of extra Not Alone pages! I'm willing to update the comic 3x a week, TH/F/SAT, for $15 a page. Not only is that really inexpensive (Kez need monies D:), it'll mean the story starts jumping and finishes soon (13 more pages left!). The only thing is I need 12 hours notice to get a page done, so if you guys want more updates that don't wait until the NEXT week, donate before an update. Details in the NA news.