February 3, 2008
I made a couple stylistic choices on this page. One: narrative in the present tense. I realized I liked it elsewhere, especially since the characters are talking in the present tense. So, this will be another break from the conventions of novel. Hmm. We'll see if I still like it tomorrow.
Two: Multiple times when Ayenroki were viewing things "with other eyes" I've changed the colors of panels. This is supposed to representative of senses humans do not have. You can see it in chapter 5 page 3, and chapter 6 pages 27 and 28.
Three: Narrative is no longer in text boxes. Too many shapes!
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